تحلیل پرارگراف های بدنه ی یک Writing Task 2
- ارسال شده توسط Amir Dequan
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- برچسب ها IELTS Writing Task 2
در این بلاگ پاراگراف های بدنه یک نمونه تسک دو (مقاله) آیلتس رو با هم برسسی میکنیم.
این سوال تسک دو را بخوانید
Task 2 Question
Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
این مقدمه ایه که برای این سوال نوشته شده. همینطور که میبینیم نظر نویسنده به وضوح بیان شده.
Introduction
Upon completing their schooling, adolescents encounter the dilemma of choosing between pursuing employment or continuing their education. While opting to secure a job immediately after school may have certain advantages, I believe that pursuing higher education at a college or university can have more benefits.
در این قسمت پاراگراف بدنه ی مقاله رو با دقت بخونین
Body Paragraph 1
The prospect of entering the job market right after school is appealing for various reasons. Many young individuals aspire to start earning an income as soon as possible. By doing so, they can attain independence and afford their own housing or start a family. Moreover, in terms of their professional trajectory, young people who opt for employment rather than further studies may experience swifter advancement. They will have opportunities to acquire practical skills and gain firsthand experience relevant to their chosen field. This can potentially lead to promotions and a successful career.
همینطور که می بینیم جمله ی موضوعی و محوری (Topic Sentence) خوب نوشته شده و تمرکز پارارگراف را ااز نظر موضوعی در همون اول پاراگراف به ما نشون میده.
The prospect of entering the job market right after school is appealing for various reasons. Many young individuals aspire to start earning an income as soon as possible. By doing so, they can attain independence and afford their own housing or start a family. Moreover, in terms of their professional trajectory, young people who opt for employment rather than further studies may experience swifter advancement. They will have opportunities to acquire practical skills and gain firsthand experience relevant to their chosen field. This can potentially lead to promotions and a successful career.
همچنین ایده های اصلی (Main Ideas) خوب بسط و گسترش داده شده ان. و در آخر پاراگراف به گونه ای جمعبندی ای صورت گرفته.
The prospect of entering the job market right after school is appealing for various reasons. Many young individuals aspire to start earning an income as soon as possible. By doing so, they can attain independence and afford their own housing or start a family. Moreover, in terms of their professional trajectory, young people who opt for employment rather than further studies may experience swifter advancement. They will have opportunities to acquire practical skills and gain firsthand experience relevant to their chosen field. This can potentially lead to promotions and a successful career.
در این بخش کلمات و عبارت ها ی خوبی که نویسنده به کار برده مشخص شده. در این نوشته تعداد خوبی از کلمات در رابطه با موضوع و همایند ها استفاده شده.
The prospect of entering the job market right after school is appealing for various reasons. Many young individuals aspire to start earning an income as soon as possible. By doing so, they can attain independence and afford their own housing or start a family. Moreover, in terms of their professional trajectory, young people who opt for employment rather than further studies may experience swifter advancement. They will have opportunities to acquire practical skills and gain firsthand experience relevant to their chosen field. This can potentially lead to promotions and a successful career.
این نوشته هرچند کوتاه نمونه ی خوبی از نوشتن پارارگراف های مقدمه و بدنه است که احتمال زیاد نمره ی 8 خواهد گرفت.
برچسب:IELTS Writing Task 2
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