بررسی یک Introduction
سوال تسک دو
Essay Question
In the future, more people will choose to go on holidays in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday. Do you agree disagree?
مقدمه نوشته شده توسط یک
An introduction written by a candidate
It is clear that people love to travel in their vacations and some argue that most individuals will choose destination in their own country instead of going to another nation. Not only it has saved the expenses of travelling but also it avoids communication problems of location. In this essay, I completely agree with this statement and it will be elaborated in the upcoming paragraphs.
اول کمی به ایرادات گرامری و لغوی این مقدمه می پردازیم
It is clear that people love to travel in their vacations and some argue that most individuals will choose destination in their own country instead of going to another nation. Not only it has saved the expenses of travelling but also it avoids communication problems of location. In this essay, I completely agree with this statement and it will be elaborated in the upcoming paragraphs.
- in their vacations => on their vacation*
- destination => destinations*
- nations => country*
- communication problems of location (unclear meaning)*
- It مرجع این ضمیر زیاد مشخص نیست => my view*
It is clear that people love to travel on their vacations and some argue that most individuals will choose destinations in their own country instead of going to another country. Not only it has saved the expenses of travelling but also it avoids communication problems one might have in a foreign country in which they speak a different language. In this essay, I completely agree with this statement and my view will be elaborated in the upcoming paragraphs.
همانطور که قبلاً بررسی شد نوشتن مقدمه دو بخش مختلف دارد اول بازنویسی سوال مقاله و بعد هم نظر نویسنده مقاله در رابطه با سوال.
در این مقاله همانطور که می بینیم قسمت اول سوال مقاله بازنویسی شده است (آبی) و نظر نویسنده هم داده شده است پس این مقاله این دو بخش مهم را در بر دارد. (صورتی)
در این مقاله همین طور که می بینیم اشاره گذرایی به دلایل نویسنده برای نظر خود داده شده است که البته چون اشاره اشاره سطحی و گذرا هیچ ایرادی ندارد. (مشکی)
It is clear that people love to travel on their vacations and some argue that most individuals will choose destinations in their own country instead of going to another country. Not only it has saved the expenses of travelling but also it avoids communication problems one might have in a foreign country in which they speak a different language. In this essay, I completely agree with this statement and my view will be elaborated in the upcoming paragraphs.
برچسب:IELTS Writing Task 2